Lady Sydney

Hmm... This was good, but I think it could be better. What your piece lacks the most of is a set rhythm (or maybe I just can't find it. lol) ...

This was actually pretty good! I liked it. :D Lol. Personally, I think it sounds like it could be a song. I'm not sure why, but it just does. I ...

That's perfectly fine, MADD. I was simply giving you what I signed up for: a critique. Not everything people tell you will be "This was fantastic". If you did well ...

Hey Val! :D (I like your name) Welcome to the ever so addictive site of YWS. ^_^ I'm Sydney, or Syd if you wish. If you have any questions or ...

I really liked your second and third! :D They're so pretty. Though, I think the one with the book could have been a lot prettier had it been an actual ...

Oooh. Greek. Nice. ^_^ 9/10

Surreptitious Sam's Unibrow Reminded Earl Pearlstine To Invent Tiny Implants Of Ukraine Saucers That was lame, but I couldn't think of anything else. :? Umm... Daunted

This is kinda late... but hi and welcome! :) I'm Sydney. If you have any questions, feel free to PM at anytime. Best of luck with your work! ~*Sydney*~

Lol. Many congrats on your 6000th! Someone's dedicated. :wink: Enjoy your "party" thing ^_^ and good luck with getting to your 7000th. *drinks Sprite instead because she can't have champagne* ...

Welcome to YWS, Rachel! :D You sound like me when I'm balancing too much at one time. I look to my journal/notebook to get away. ^_^ I like writing Romance, ...

Hmm... I think this one is pretty good. Deep. ^_^ I'm not too sure about the whole meaning behind it, but your words flowed together nicely, in my opinion. Nice ...

8.5/10 Lol!

Thanks to everyone, but this will be on hold for a while. After I finish "Heiress" and "The Lucky Number Seven", I'll try to come back to this. Thanks again! ...

I’m not sure why we’re f riends anymore . It doesn’t seem like you really care . I’ve just become one more of your chores . You and the fags ...

Interesting, smart, and organized. I like it. Thanks a bunch!